viernes, 29 de enero de 2010

Más que dibujos

Su mano diestra zigzagueaba con soltura sobre el papel, dejando en cada movimiento un nuevo trazo de color. La imagen cobraba sentido con fuerza y elegancia, sumando detalles y texturas en la misma medida que él sentía le estaba volcando alma a su creación.
Fue entonces que apareció Molinari, el rector. Hombre serio, de semblante aburrido. Se detuvo a su lado y lo observó dibujar unos pocos segundos. Quebró el silencio con una frase de compromiso.
- Te está quedando lindo el dibujo, Felipe.
La mano se detuvo, la obra quedó en pausa. El no podía creer lo que había escuchado. Lentamente, intentando ocultar el odio que sin dudas ya se había trasladado a su mirada, giró su cabeza hacia el lado de donde había provenido la voz.
Molinari sospechó que había dicho algo impropio al ver ese rostro, pero ignoraba qué. Sin embargo, él se lo hizo saber de inmediato.
- ¿Cómo "el dibujo"? ¿Para usted esto es solo un dibujo? ¿Acaso está ciego, no lo ve? Esto está lleno de vida, mire bien, no opine desde lejos, acérquese al papel, vea milímetro a milímetro, comprenda cada porción de lo que hay en la hoja y atrévase nuevamente a decirme que es un "dibujo".
La voz sonaba desafiante, agitada, visiblemente afectada por el comentario. Molinari no sabía que decirle al joven. Apenas si atinó a estirar el cuerpo y la cara hacia el papel, para observar de más cerca pero en su opinión, seguía siendo "un lindo" dibujo.
- La verdad pibe - le dijo para salvar la situación - tenés razón, mirá si seré idiota, es sensacional lo que estás haciendo, el papel parece... tener vida.
Y sonrió como un estúpido, para luego alejarse por donde había venido.
El se dio cuenta que no había sido sincero, pero si seguía disgustado, no podría seguir dándole alma a su obra, así que se sereno y volvió a lo suyo.
- Ven lo que les digo, si uno intenta acercar a la gente de la verdad, salen corriendo. Pero no, el loco es uno. Es hora que se vayan dando cuenta que tienen encerrado en un manicomio al cuerdo y los locos, andan sueltos. ¿O me equivoco?
- Para nada Felipe - contestó uno de los hombrecitos del dibujo - si nos damos cuenta desde acá de lo que pasa en tu mundo. Por suerte hay tipos como vos que se encargan de abrirnos estas ventanas para aprender un poco más y no cometer los mismos errores en nuestras vidas.

23 comentarios:

SIL dijo...

Qué divino, Neto...!!

Felipe va adorar ésto !!


EN LAS BUENAS Y EN LAS MALAS
NO HAY QUE DEJAR
QUE LOS CUERDOS DE ATAR
TE CORTEN LAS ALAS ...

:)


Abrazo gigante.


SIL

Felipe R. Avila dijo...

Neto querido! ¡Justamente mientras escuchaba al hombrecito
(que simepre me habla bajito,claro) me estaba preguntando que estarias haciendo vos en la celda de al lado!
¿seguís escribiendo con el pie derecho,eh?
Bueno, en serio ahora
¿qué puedo decir?
Gracias por pensar un cacho
en mi y ficcionalizarme,che...
Un abrazo y en breve te lo doy en persona.
Felipe
PD:Tiene razón Sil, ¡me encantó!

Raul Avila dijo...

bueno esta historia coincide con lo que sostengo, los historietistas nunca mueren se meten en una página y tarde o temprano los encontramos en algun cuadrito de historieta y lo sabemos porque a veces tienen otro estilo.....( o se nota que no es el mismo trazo del autor)

saludos

Con tinta violeta dijo...

Genial, sencillamente. Muchas veces solo quien escribe, pinta, esculpe o practica algún otro arte sabe lo que es tener la certeza de que ese mundo creado o ese personaje, existe, habla, camina, siente, sufre, cambia...
él/ella...y algún otro montón de locos, que por aquí veo unos cuantos, ja,ja.
Un abrazo.
Paloma.

Netomancia dijo...

Sil, muchas gracias. A veces los locos no están tan locos y nosotros tan cuerdos, miramos para el lado equivocado, o no? Saludos!

Don Felipe, fue un pequeño guiñe, como para recibirlo de sus días de vacaciones, así se va ambientando a la realidad y al manicomio del laburo, que lo espera de nuevo por estos días jajaj. Y si, estoy en la celda de al lado, con una semana muy apretado en materia de tiempo, poca conexión a internet y apenas unos minutos para los relatos de este blog y el mío. Pero bueno, son rachas. Un abrazo!

Don Raúl, me encantó el comentario y más viniendo de usted. Es lindo pensar que dentro de la obra hay un mundo verdadero y lo que uno hace es "limpiar" la ventana que mira hacia el otro lado. Saludos!

Doña Tinta, comparto lo que dice, y mucho más sobre los locos que pululan por aquí jaja. Gracias como siempre! Un abrazo.

el oso dijo...

¡¡Excelente, Neto!!
Se me ocurre que amigos como este Felipe son los capaces de mostrarnos que la vida no circula sólo entre quienes se posicionan allá arriba, sino que -a contramano- brota donde menos se lo espera...
Y el Felipete, de 10...

Abrazos varios

Netomancia dijo...

Don Oso, son gente como el Mono de su relato, que nos hacen ver las cosas desde otra altura. Un abrazo!

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